The introduction of the additional help freed by white blaze felt so abrupt and plot convenient, but since it wasn't focused on that much I guess it was fine. The plot progresses way too fast, but the pacing has slowed to give room for the final battle.
Fast-PacedRushed PacingStory Overload
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