rynnohanarated Unnamed Memory Episode 10 - Blank Slate Children
The story is starting to improve a lot, but it's still too fast. Oscar and Tinasha's relationship also feels too sudden and deep, even I was surprised by some scenes in this episode. But overall, it's still followable and the story's conflict is good.
Pacing IssuesPlot ProgressionStrong Chemistry
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